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There are several plot points that lack conclusive resolution, and I feel very much betrayed by a specific aspect, even to the point of J.K. Rowling taunting us with it during the book. False hope is cruel, and the author gave us a lot of that with at least three characters.

  1. Umbridge: I'm sorry, but I wanted something more than her just getting knocked out at the Ministry. I can assume that Kingsley will clean house, but she deserves worse, and I found it very unsatisfying.

  2. The vial. We can theorize that Horace Slughorn used it to summon the spiders, but unless I missed a sentence or two, no idea, really, especially given that odd echo of Aragog with Aberforth. She clearly didn't forget about that plot point entirely, so what's the deal?

  3. I expect we're supposed to assume that Mad-Eye is dead with Harry burying the eye, but the fuss she made over nobody finding his body in the books engendered uncertainty.

  4. The stunted thing in the train station that's "beyond help." I guess we're meant to assume that it's a segment of Voldemort's soul since he passed out as well, but she never says per se.

  5. I am even more pissed off than I was before Book 7 about Dumbledore. I'm sorry, perhaps it's the combination of being an English major with being a huge Myers-Briggs J, but you do not throw in all that phoenix symbolism, even going so far as to name a bloody book as such, and then really kill off the character. There's red herrings, and then there's going way overboard to the point that breaking the rule doesn't make sense. One can argue that AD's immortality is his status as a teacher and little Albus and all that, but it's weak and we all know it. Frankly, this lessens her as a writer, in my opinion.

    Permit me to be very clear: it's not so much that I mind Albus Dumbledore dying. It's natural for the torch to get passed from one generation to the other, mentor passing on and being more human than expected, yadda yadda. It's that she set up this huuuuuuuuuge cushion of expectation that he was coming back, and even had Ron saying "Maybe he's not really dead!" in this book after she'd done interviews saying AD was dead! That was taunting. I'm sorry, but it was Not Cool. Oh, and the whole thing with Sirius was just totally cheap: it's now very obvious that she was merely leaving herself wiggle room. Guess we know now why the Avada Kedavra was included in the movie. :(

  6. It seems like Moaning Myrtle should've made some sort of appearance, given her recurring role in previous books.

Doesn't it seem like the other schools should've been involved somehow against the Big Bad? She had the perfect opening for Krum to mention what Durmstrang was doing, and clearly Fleur's family knew what was going on. Also, Ron and Hermione sort of got tossed to the side near the end.

I'm sure she thought she was being all "full circle" with the Marauders being reunited in death and Harry being Teddy's godfather, but I found it a bit trite. Furthermore, it totally negated Harry's deliberate act of trying to avoid creating another orphan situation. I get that there's collateral damage when fighting an entity like Voldemort, but some of the deaths seemed downright gratuitous, especially Hedwig's.

I also thought Snape and Draco deserved more time for their respective resolutions, esp. Snape. He got killed by a snake: cliché much? At least I was right about him, although I was 99.9% sure that I would be. I've never thrown a book in my life, but I would've been mightily tempted had she made him evil.

I'm glad that Neville got some moments in the sun, but was killing Nagini the right moment? I liked Molly's moment, don't misunderstand me -- the Weasleys have given everything to helping Harry and Dumbledore -- but it somehow seemed as though Neville, Neville's grandmother, or at least Hermione, should've done it. Maybe Molly could've gotten Fenrir instead. If Bellatrix was going to get axed anyway, why not have it be Neville, given all the backstory there? I get that JK is clearly pretty anti-revenge and is all rah-rah on mother's love as protection, let's echo Lily again, doesn't want the main good guys deliberately killing people except via the noblest of intentions (even Voldy essentially threw himself on his sword) but ... enhh. Speaking of the Weasleys, I thought Ginny might've done a bit more. And were they running old Clint Eastwood movies on the television in the hotel where Rowling finished the novel? 'cause I think she should've resisted the desire to make what was essentially a Dirty Harry pun with Harry's "Do ya feel lucky, Voldy? Well, do ya?" speech near the end. :p

The first half of the book really drags in several parts, too. Not to mention that having the trio wear The Ring the locket so Samwise Ron the Loyal could leave reeked of Plot Deviceness.

All in all, this book could've been improved by more assertive editing.

Maybe I'll like it better after a second reading, but right now, I feel somewhat cheated.


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Jul. 22nd, 2007 06:16 am (UTC)
At least at this point, Bo Peep believes that the thing on Harry's forhead isn't a horcrux and she is furious. Mostly, I'm gathering she is not impressed

I'm not a huge potterista so I hope I'm saying all this right!
Jul. 22nd, 2007 06:21 am (UTC)
You're saying it exactly right! It doesn't surprise me that Bo Peep is on point on this one. If she's as literate as her mama, then I'm sure she definitely has some astute insights. :)
Jul. 22nd, 2007 02:36 pm (UTC)
Hi, can I link to this? You have summed up a lot of what I am thinking!

I loved parts of the book but others not so much at all. And I say this as a fantasy fan, not a fangirl (because as a fangirl my "ships" are still a-ok)
Jul. 22nd, 2007 03:42 pm (UTC)
Wow! I'm incredibly honored and flattered that you consider it worthy of linkage! Of course you may!

Even after having slept on it, this is not the book that I thought I'd be getting for resolution.

One part I did like, though: Kreacher's conversion.
Jul. 22nd, 2007 06:33 pm (UTC)
I also really liked Hermione's bravery. What she did with her parents -- she was absolutely willing to put everything on the line while selflessly minimizing the fallout wherever possible. Very courageous.
Jul. 23rd, 2007 05:41 am (UTC)
I had to walk away from the book for a couple days it was just dragging so much I couldn't stand it. It also go reptitive, every chapter, hermoine shouting to harry to "block out the visions" then the same after that with death eaters smacking their symbols every time you turned around.

I was actually tickled that hermoine got tortured, finally something bad was happening to the main characters, but honestly, I don't think enough happened bad to hermoine and ron, I wanted... MORE. The book drug and wasn't exciting. I got a lil excited at some parts, but the the excitement went nowhere, just deflated.

I too wanted umbridge and bellatrix to have more coming to them, at least let neville have his day for his parents' sake, and what happened to luna? are we to assume she was the one draco married? I wanted more out of the malfoys, really.

Just guhh. I have my own rant I went on. The whole point of 7 books was that it was harry's 7 years at hogwarts, and he didn't even GO this year, it was when I read that I took a step back and knew the rest was going to be utter shit.
Jul. 23rd, 2007 05:47 am (UTC)
P.S. I also thought of the rings when they were hiding with the locket. Oh look, its lord of the rings... they're wandering with one of voldy's precious'! *eyeroll*
Jul. 23rd, 2007 08:25 am (UTC)
i apologise for replying when this isn't my entry, but how can you walk away for a couple of days when the book was released yesterday? unless you're referring to the leaked version?

(i hope this doesn't come off negatively--i'm just curious)
Jul. 23rd, 2007 08:48 am (UTC)
heh, yeah, it was the leaky carpet one!
Jul. 23rd, 2007 04:20 pm (UTC)
I kept bloody waiting for Umbridge to get what she deserved! After Order of the Phoenix, I comforted myself with, "Oh, well, J.K. must be saving her final comeuppance for the last book." And then, pffft, practically nothing!

Like you, I would also like to have known what happened to Luna.
Jul. 23rd, 2007 07:14 pm (UTC)
Luna married Draco? How was that hinted at?
Jul. 23rd, 2007 07:44 pm (UTC)
No, but they just said he had a wife and his son was the spitting image of draco, so I threw that out there cause lucius and narcissa were both striking white blondes and luna fits that equation...

cept for her personality... but she's wierd enough, its possible!
Jul. 23rd, 2007 07:09 am (UTC)
I agree with what you have said, there are also many referenced to WWII in the text. I did enjoy the Prince's Tale and Kreacher's Tale though.
On the whole tho I feel very let down by the book, there are too many unresolved issues, and stories, I really don't think JKR knew how to finish. There were many sections that could have been cut down (or out) and this could have given her room for finishing details.
I feel like I have been left out in the cold.
There was one good quote though "We did it, we bashed them, wee Potter’s the one,
And Voldy’s gone moldy, so now let’s have fun!"
Cheers Therese
Jul. 23rd, 2007 01:54 pm (UTC)
I especially liked Kreacher's story as well, and I feel the same way about "trim this excess, and put in these details so that things are actually resolved." It felt very scattered.

I also liked the quote about Snape and the shampoo. :)

I'm going to be writing a summary of the things that I did like in the book within the next 48 hours or so, probably.

Thanks for visiting!
Jul. 23rd, 2007 08:31 am (UTC)
i can't remember where i found this entry (i have a few DH reviews open on firefox), so i hope you don't find it creepy that i'm leaving a comment!

i agree with most of what you wrote, even though i'm relatively happy with the book. as snape was (and is) my favourite character, i was so ready to put down the book if JKR screwed up and decided to make him evil. i was worried for a while.

you're right about ron and hermione getting pitched to the side at the end. harry sees snape's memories, concludes he must die, bumps into neville in the hallway, and doesn't see them again until hagrid brings his body back. i know he wanted to avoid them so it wouldn't be too painful, but there really wasn't much of them until the awful epilogue.

in reference to point 5, i felt like harry was the one who got the phoenix treatment, with him "dying" and then coming back to life.

neville definitely deserved to kill bellatrix. i would've been happy to see molly go after fenrir, although i'm hoping remus died after killing fenrir himself. i find the lack of detail around remus' death upsetting.
Jul. 23rd, 2007 01:44 pm (UTC)
You make a very good point regarding #5, so good that I'm smacking my forehead like a house elf a bit. Okay, while it still isn't cricket to have all that symbolism swirling around Dumbledore, it at least does make some sense to utilize it for the main character, seeing as how he was the one that all of this was all about in the first place. That really makes me feel a lot better. I'm still irked, but it at least has a good beat and you can dance to it. :)

You're most welcome to leave comments. I feel very happy that, with the number of reaction posts out there, people liked mine well enough to invest the time in saying something. *smiles shyly*

I agree that the lack of specifics about Lupin's death diminished his unnecessary death even further. I would've been okay with Bill killing Fenrir, too, of course, but the wolf against wolf bit would have been appropriate.

Jul. 23rd, 2007 06:45 pm (UTC)
I agree with your puzzlement over Umbridge. HOW did she manage to get herself back into the Ministry, even with Voldemort's flunkies infiltrating the place? I wasn't expecting to see her again after OotP, honestly.

I was also wondering about the Britain-only party, but if there was the same kind of infiltration going on in other countries that was happening in Britain, then perhaps they had trouble joining the party? (Randomly, where were the American witches and wizards during all this? Watching NASCAR?)

It didn't break my heart the way His Dark Materials did, but TDH was an enjoyable summer read, all in all.
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